7.20.2012

shred

ripped to shreds by shreds my own
thought i'd finally found my home.
you grew, they grew, one at a time.
these voices, these people,
these enemies of mine.

3 comments:

  1. I suggest only one change...

    you grew, they grew, one at a time.
    these voices, these people,
    these enemies, mine.

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